[FFML] A Stolen Love (unfinished draft please c&c)

Sun Jun 7 13:41:38 PDT 2015

What is a foxfic?

First time that I heard it.

Kinai.

2015-06-07 21:39 GMT+02:00 Alexander CHEEZEM <aleh at aol.com>:

> It's a foxfic. He's going precisely nowhere with it.
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> -- Aleh
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> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ignacio Moreno <kinai2k7 at gmail.com>
> To: The Fanfiction Mailing List <ffml at chez-vrolet.net>
> Sent: Sun, Jun 7, 2015 2:44 pm
> Subject: Re: [FFML] A Stolen Love (unfinished draft please c&c)
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> I dont know exactly where you want to go with this story. But it is the
> first
> time that I saw a good Setsuna and a Bad Serenity at the same time.
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> Good luck
> withbit.
>
> Kinai.
> El 06/06/2015 04:50, "Cute Nightgazer Starlight"
> <nightgazer at comcast.net>
> escribió:
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> >
> > Disclaimer : I don't own them, I'm very
> poor.
> >
> >
> >
> > Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon / MLP / Alt History Xover Fic
> >
> >
> >
> > A
> Stolen Love
> >
> > by
> >
> > Nightgazer Starlight
> >
> >
> >
> >
> > Prologue
> >
> >
> >
> > Time :
> Silver Millennium 998,000 B.C.
> >
> >
> >
> > In a room in the palace on the small
> distant planet Pluto two lovers were
> > having their final meeting.
> >
> > "I don't
> want to leave you Setsuna.", said Ranma.
> >
> > "You have no choice Ranma.", said
> Setsuna in a sad voice. "You know that I
> > belong to Queen Serenity. If she ever
> found out about us she would kill
> > you."
> >
> > Setsuna looked like she was about
> to cry.
> >
> > Ranma looked angry at that and said, "She can try, but I will not
> be
> > separated from you!"
> >
> > "No Ranma!", Setsuna exclaimed with a look of fear
> on her face. "You can't
> > go against her, she'll win!"
> >
> > "I'm the best combat
> mage/martial artist in the Sol system!", he said.
> > "And Ranma Saotome of House
> Saotome never looses!"
> >
> > "Ranma she has the Silver Crystal!", Setsuna yelled.
> "There is no way you
> > can fight against that type of power now!"
> >
> > "I'm not
> afraid of that bitch queen!", snarled Ranma.
> >
> > "You should be!", said a cruel
> and cold voice from the shadowed corners.
> >
> > Ranma and Pluto were startled and
> whirled around to face their worst
> > enemy, Queen Serenity.
> >
> > The queen walked
> out of the shadows, and holding the crystal murmured a
> > holding spell.
> >
> >
> Ranma, to his anger, found he couldn't move.
> >
> > The queen smiled and approached
> closer. She walked up to Setsuna who was
> > held similarly and slapped her hard
> across the face.
> >
> > "How dare you betray me with this male filth you little
> piece of nothing
> > trash!", snarled the queen then.
> >
> > Setsuna had tears
> running down her cheeks and a look of fear in her eyes.
> >
> > "And you!", hissed
> the queen turning towards Ranma now. "What made a
> > little piece of male filth
> like you think you could take what was mine!?
> > The Senshi are mine and my
> daughter's only to do with as we please! They
> > are not for the likes of a
> ~male~ like you! You will be punished male for
> > daring to touch my
> property!"
> >
> > In Ranma's eyes were rage, anger, and hatred for the tyrant
> male-hating
> > mad queen.
> >
> > The queen saw it and, snarling in madness, reached
> back her hand and
> > punched him hard numerous times all over.
> >
> > She then held
> the crystal aloft and said, "You shall never see her again
> > Ranma!"
> >
> > She
> intoned a spell and then said, "I banish you! I banish you to a time
> > and place
> where long after her death! I banish you to a life of pain,
> > betrayal,
> ambition, greed, and power! May you never be content with what
> > you have, but
> always desire more! May you live a life where you are given
> > everything, but
> still want yet more! May you betray the one who protects
> > you! May you seek
> more power and run away from those who care for you to
> > get it! May you fall
> down a dark path seeking your ambition! May you be
> > reborn as something
> opposite the ~male~ ~human~ you are sooo proud to be
> > right now!"
> >
> > She
> smirked at him and said, "Goodbye!"
> >
> > Ranma vanished in a pillar of light.
> >
> >
> The Silver Queen then turned to Setsuna and hit her repeatedly. She then
> >
> released her from the spell and smashed her face in the floor.
> >
> > She got and
> looked down at Setsuna and cruelly said, "Don't ever forget
> > Setsuna, you're my
> bitch!"
> >
> > She then used the crystal to erase all memories of Ranma from
> Setsuna's
> > mind just as she had used it to erase all memories of Setsuna from
> Ranma's
> > mind.
> >
> > She left the room and Setsuna recovered enough of her
> strength to move
> > around and she then lifted herself up. She couldn't remember
> what that had
> > been about, but she knew she had displeased her mistress in some
> way then.
> >
> > 'Serenity, I will see your Empire destroyed for all you have done
> to me!',
> > she vowed to herself, not even remembering the most important reason
> for
> > vengeance - her true love Ranma Saotome.
> >
> > ~~~
> >
> > Earth - North America
> - Southern California - Canterlot City - 2015
> >
> >
> >
> > A flame-haired, young,
> teenage girl wakes up throwing the covers off of
> > herself. She tries to get her
> breathing under control. She just stares
> > straight ahead for awhile.
> >
> > "So,"
> she says to herself. "I used to be named Ranma Saotome. Was human.
> > Was male.
> And is that part ever going to be confusing. Was in some other
> > star system, at
> least I think. Was in love with a girl named Setsuna. And
> > some mad Queen who
> makes Sombra look like a Cub Scout didn't like that,
> > didn't like that I was
> male either, and banished to me to a life of misery."
> >
> > "Right," she says.
> "First things first - Finish integrating past life
> > memories. Second - Thank
> Princess Twilight Sparkle for hitting me with that
> > Rainbow of Friendship, it
> canceled all the bad parts of that mad Queen's
> > curses. Third - Tell Princess
> Twilight Sparkle and others what is going on.
> > Fourth - Find a way back there.
> Fifth - Find Setsuna and restore her
> > memories, rescue her from that place, and
> kick Queen Serenity's ass.
> > Because when it comes to important things. Things
> that matter, Sunset
> > Shimmer doesn't ever loose any."
> >
> >
> >
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