[FFML] A Stolen Love (unfinished draft please c&c)

[Mythril Moth]

A foxfic is a curious spurt of psuedo-literature crafted by one 
Fox/"Cute Kitsune Kaydee"/"Cute Neko Hibiki"/"Cute Stargazer 
Nightingale"/etc., which typically features a crossover between three or 
more properties, is short and pointless, and if it actually presents a 
plausible, interesting idea, it is never followed up on. Hundreds of 
these curious drabbles have existed over the past twenty or so years. 
None of them have ever mutated into legitimate fanfiction.

On 6/7/2015 3:41 PM, Ignacio Moreno wrote:
> What is a foxfic?
>
> First time that I heard it.
>
> Kinai.
>
> 2015-06-07 21:39 GMT+02:00 Alexander CHEEZEM <aleh at aol.com>:
>
>> It's a foxfic. He's going precisely nowhere with it.
>>
>> -- Aleh
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Ignacio Moreno <kinai2k7 at gmail.com>
>> To: The Fanfiction Mailing List <ffml at chez-vrolet.net>
>> Sent: Sun, Jun 7, 2015 2:44 pm
>> Subject: Re: [FFML] A Stolen Love (unfinished draft please c&c)
>>
>>
>> I dont know exactly where you want to go with this story. But it is the
>> first
>> time that I saw a good Setsuna and a Bad Serenity at the same time.
>>
>> Good luck
>> withbit.
>>
>> Kinai.
>> El 06/06/2015 04:50, "Cute Nightgazer Starlight"
>> <nightgazer at comcast.net>
>> escribió:
>>
>>> Disclaimer : I don't own them, I'm very
>> poor.
>>>
>>>
>>> Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon / MLP / Alt History Xover Fic
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> A
>> Stolen Love
>>> by
>>>
>>> Nightgazer Starlight
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Prologue
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Time :
>> Silver Millennium 998,000 B.C.
>>>
>>>
>>> In a room in the palace on the small
>> distant planet Pluto two lovers were
>>> having their final meeting.
>>>
>>> "I don't
>> want to leave you Setsuna.", said Ranma.
>>> "You have no choice Ranma.", said
>> Setsuna in a sad voice. "You know that I
>>> belong to Queen Serenity. If she ever
>> found out about us she would kill
>>> you."
>>>
>>> Setsuna looked like she was about
>> to cry.
>>> Ranma looked angry at that and said, "She can try, but I will not
>> be
>>> separated from you!"
>>>
>>> "No Ranma!", Setsuna exclaimed with a look of fear
>> on her face. "You can't
>>> go against her, she'll win!"
>>>
>>> "I'm the best combat
>> mage/martial artist in the Sol system!", he said.
>>> "And Ranma Saotome of House
>> Saotome never looses!"
>>> "Ranma she has the Silver Crystal!", Setsuna yelled.
>> "There is no way you
>>> can fight against that type of power now!"
>>>
>>> "I'm not
>> afraid of that bitch queen!", snarled Ranma.
>>> "You should be!", said a cruel
>> and cold voice from the shadowed corners.
>>> Ranma and Pluto were startled and
>> whirled around to face their worst
>>> enemy, Queen Serenity.
>>>
>>> The queen walked
>> out of the shadows, and holding the crystal murmured a
>>> holding spell.
>>>
>>>
>> Ranma, to his anger, found he couldn't move.
>>> The queen smiled and approached
>> closer. She walked up to Setsuna who was
>>> held similarly and slapped her hard
>> across the face.
>>> "How dare you betray me with this male filth you little
>> piece of nothing
>>> trash!", snarled the queen then.
>>>
>>> Setsuna had tears
>> running down her cheeks and a look of fear in her eyes.
>>> "And you!", hissed
>> the queen turning towards Ranma now. "What made a
>>> little piece of male filth
>> like you think you could take what was mine!?
>>> The Senshi are mine and my
>> daughter's only to do with as we please! They
>>> are not for the likes of a
>> ~male~ like you! You will be punished male for
>>> daring to touch my
>> property!"
>>> In Ranma's eyes were rage, anger, and hatred for the tyrant
>> male-hating
>>> mad queen.
>>>
>>> The queen saw it and, snarling in madness, reached
>> back her hand and
>>> punched him hard numerous times all over.
>>>
>>> She then held
>> the crystal aloft and said, "You shall never see her again
>>> Ranma!"
>>>
>>> She
>> intoned a spell and then said, "I banish you! I banish you to a time
>>> and place
>> where long after her death! I banish you to a life of pain,
>>> betrayal,
>> ambition, greed, and power! May you never be content with what
>>> you have, but
>> always desire more! May you live a life where you are given
>>> everything, but
>> still want yet more! May you betray the one who protects
>>> you! May you seek
>> more power and run away from those who care for you to
>>> get it! May you fall
>> down a dark path seeking your ambition! May you be
>>> reborn as something
>> opposite the ~male~ ~human~ you are sooo proud to be
>>> right now!"
>>>
>>> She
>> smirked at him and said, "Goodbye!"
>>> Ranma vanished in a pillar of light.
>>>
>>>
>> The Silver Queen then turned to Setsuna and hit her repeatedly. She then
>> released her from the spell and smashed her face in the floor.
>>> She got and
>> looked down at Setsuna and cruelly said, "Don't ever forget
>>> Setsuna, you're my
>> bitch!"
>>> She then used the crystal to erase all memories of Ranma from
>> Setsuna's
>>> mind just as she had used it to erase all memories of Setsuna from
>> Ranma's
>>> mind.
>>>
>>> She left the room and Setsuna recovered enough of her
>> strength to move
>>> around and she then lifted herself up. She couldn't remember
>> what that had
>>> been about, but she knew she had displeased her mistress in some
>> way then.
>>> 'Serenity, I will see your Empire destroyed for all you have done
>> to me!',
>>> she vowed to herself, not even remembering the most important reason
>> for
>>> vengeance - her true love Ranma Saotome.
>>>
>>> ~~~
>>>
>>> Earth - North America
>> - Southern California - Canterlot City - 2015
>>>
>>>
>>> A flame-haired, young,
>> teenage girl wakes up throwing the covers off of
>>> herself. She tries to get her
>> breathing under control. She just stares
>>> straight ahead for awhile.
>>>
>>> "So,"
>> she says to herself. "I used to be named Ranma Saotome. Was human.
>>> Was male.
>> And is that part ever going to be confusing. Was in some other
>>> star system, at
>> least I think. Was in love with a girl named Setsuna. And
>>> some mad Queen who
>> makes Sombra look like a Cub Scout didn't like that,
>>> didn't like that I was
>> male either, and banished to me to a life of misery."
>>> "Right," she says.
>> "First things first - Finish integrating past life
>>> memories. Second - Thank
>> Princess Twilight Sparkle for hitting me with that
>>> Rainbow of Friendship, it
>> canceled all the bad parts of that mad Queen's
>>> curses. Third - Tell Princess
>> Twilight Sparkle and others what is going on.
>>> Fourth - Find a way back there.
>> Fifth - Find Setsuna and restore her
>>> memories, rescue her from that place, and
>> kick Queen Serenity's ass.
>>> Because when it comes to important things. Things
>> that matter, Sunset
>>> Shimmer doesn't ever loose any."
>>>
>>>
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