[FFML] A Stolen Love (unfinished draft please c&c)

[Alexander CHEEZEM]

It's a foxfic. He's going precisely nowhere with it.

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-----Original Message-----
From: Ignacio Moreno <kinai2k7 at gmail.com>
To: The Fanfiction Mailing List <ffml at chez-vrolet.net>
Sent: Sun, Jun 7, 2015 2:44 pm
Subject: Re: [FFML] A Stolen Love (unfinished draft please c&c)


I dont know exactly where you want to go with this story. But it is the
first
time that I saw a good Setsuna and a Bad Serenity at the same time.

Good luck
withbit.

Kinai.
El 06/06/2015 04:50, "Cute Nightgazer Starlight"
<nightgazer at comcast.net>
escribió:

>
> Disclaimer : I don't own them, I'm very
poor.
>
>
>
> Ranma 1/2 / Sailor Moon / MLP / Alt History Xover Fic
>
>
>
> A
Stolen Love
>
> by
>
> Nightgazer Starlight
>
>
>
>
> Prologue
>
>
>
> Time :
Silver Millennium 998,000 B.C.
>
>
>
> In a room in the palace on the small
distant planet Pluto two lovers were
> having their final meeting.
>
> "I don't
want to leave you Setsuna.", said Ranma.
>
> "You have no choice Ranma.", said
Setsuna in a sad voice. "You know that I
> belong to Queen Serenity. If she ever
found out about us she would kill
> you."
>
> Setsuna looked like she was about
to cry.
>
> Ranma looked angry at that and said, "She can try, but I will not
be
> separated from you!"
>
> "No Ranma!", Setsuna exclaimed with a look of fear
on her face. "You can't
> go against her, she'll win!"
>
> "I'm the best combat
mage/martial artist in the Sol system!", he said.
> "And Ranma Saotome of House
Saotome never looses!"
>
> "Ranma she has the Silver Crystal!", Setsuna yelled.
"There is no way you
> can fight against that type of power now!"
>
> "I'm not
afraid of that bitch queen!", snarled Ranma.
>
> "You should be!", said a cruel
and cold voice from the shadowed corners.
>
> Ranma and Pluto were startled and
whirled around to face their worst
> enemy, Queen Serenity.
>
> The queen walked
out of the shadows, and holding the crystal murmured a
> holding spell.
>
>
Ranma, to his anger, found he couldn't move.
>
> The queen smiled and approached
closer. She walked up to Setsuna who was
> held similarly and slapped her hard
across the face.
>
> "How dare you betray me with this male filth you little
piece of nothing
> trash!", snarled the queen then.
>
> Setsuna had tears
running down her cheeks and a look of fear in her eyes.
>
> "And you!", hissed
the queen turning towards Ranma now. "What made a
> little piece of male filth
like you think you could take what was mine!?
> The Senshi are mine and my
daughter's only to do with as we please! They
> are not for the likes of a 
~male~ like you! You will be punished male for
> daring to touch my
property!"
>
> In Ranma's eyes were rage, anger, and hatred for the tyrant
male-hating
> mad queen.
>
> The queen saw it and, snarling in madness, reached
back her hand and
> punched him hard numerous times all over.
>
> She then held
the crystal aloft and said, "You shall never see her again
> Ranma!"
>
> She
intoned a spell and then said, "I banish you! I banish you to a time
> and place
where long after her death! I banish you to a life of pain,
> betrayal,
ambition, greed, and power! May you never be content with what
> you have, but
always desire more! May you live a life where you are given
> everything, but
still want yet more! May you betray the one who protects
> you! May you seek
more power and run away from those who care for you to
> get it! May you fall
down a dark path seeking your ambition! May you be
> reborn as something
opposite the ~male~ ~human~ you are sooo proud to be
> right now!"
>
> She
smirked at him and said, "Goodbye!"
>
> Ranma vanished in a pillar of light.
>
>
The Silver Queen then turned to Setsuna and hit her repeatedly. She then
>
released her from the spell and smashed her face in the floor.
>
> She got and
looked down at Setsuna and cruelly said, "Don't ever forget
> Setsuna, you're my
bitch!"
>
> She then used the crystal to erase all memories of Ranma from
Setsuna's
> mind just as she had used it to erase all memories of Setsuna from
Ranma's
> mind.
>
> She left the room and Setsuna recovered enough of her
strength to move
> around and she then lifted herself up. She couldn't remember
what that had
> been about, but she knew she had displeased her mistress in some
way then.
>
> 'Serenity, I will see your Empire destroyed for all you have done
to me!',
> she vowed to herself, not even remembering the most important reason
for
> vengeance - her true love Ranma Saotome.
>
> ~~~
>
> Earth - North America
- Southern California - Canterlot City - 2015
>
>
>
> A flame-haired, young,
teenage girl wakes up throwing the covers off of
> herself. She tries to get her
breathing under control. She just stares
> straight ahead for awhile.
>
> "So,"
she says to herself. "I used to be named Ranma Saotome. Was human.
> Was male.
And is that part ever going to be confusing. Was in some other
> star system, at
least I think. Was in love with a girl named Setsuna. And
> some mad Queen who
makes Sombra look like a Cub Scout didn't like that,
> didn't like that I was
male either, and banished to me to a life of misery."
>
> "Right," she says.
"First things first - Finish integrating past life
> memories. Second - Thank
Princess Twilight Sparkle for hitting me with that
> Rainbow of Friendship, it
canceled all the bad parts of that mad Queen's
> curses. Third - Tell Princess
Twilight Sparkle and others what is going on.
> Fourth - Find a way back there.
Fifth - Find Setsuna and restore her
> memories, rescue her from that place, and
kick Queen Serenity's ass.
> Because when it comes to important things. Things
that matter, Sunset
> Shimmer doesn't ever loose any."
>
>
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