[FFML] [FIC][BGC] Frozen Butterfly arc 3 chapter 4 Final Draft
skychan
skywize at gmail.com
Fri Mar 28 14:11:28 PDT 2014
>
> They're still killing Kari! ;_;
>>>>
>>>> Sorry, sorry, somehow I missed that despite your warning me about it
>> the
>> first time.
>>
>
> I can tell that you tweaked it, it's actually a little funnier this way,
> ehehe... but it's too soon for her to die! :< (Unless she has memory
> backups somewhere? I think thats a different story though...)
>
> ;)
Not that she's really thought about it but... There was the cryogenics
process, and Genom did copy her brain down at least once that she knows
of...
> Aside from that nitpick, thanks for adding this paragraph :) Makes it
>>> feel
>>> like she's calmed down some, or is getting more used to things... which
>>> also makes me think something bad is going to happen before long, but
>>> that
>>> may just be me ;)
>>>
>>
>> I think you are paranoid. Just because cannonically Priss kill's Sylvie
>> in the next few day's, Anri gets swept up by Largo, and beam satalites
>> destroy several Genom towers, countless lives, and decimate Australian and
>> German cities... well whats the problem?
>>
>
> Of course I'm paranoid, that's what I do ;)
> But NOW the KS are going to have a DD Battlemover and/or fusion bomb! And
> you think a little downtime is supposed to make me happy, hmm?
>
> ^_^
>
> Beam sats are one of the things I like most about original BGC... good
> times :)
>
> Why wouldn't downtime make you happy? That means that Largo has more time
to get control of the beam satelites and so they are more likely to make an
appearance in my fic right?
> As for what she's doing... well I would think it obvious. She's
>> planning to trade a potentially VERY dangerous battlemover for
>> money, repairs, and identities for her cousins as well as perhaps
>> some good will and understanding.
>>
>
> That's the goal, yes, *that* makes sense.
>
> But after the discussion with Nene before, I'm not sure how she intends to
> DO that without blowing everyone's cover.
>
> Though Sylvie's discussion w/ Priss may reintroduce the KS to Kari, I
> wasn't expecting Kari to blow Priss's cover as Blue Saber... and I
> understood from Kari's conversations w/ Nene that she can't really use Nene
> as a courier to the KS without jeopardizing either Nene's connection to KS
> or her own connection to Nene.
>
> So how is she intending to negotiate the trade to start with?
>
> Reach out to KS online and hope they don't just send Nene after her?
> Introduce Sylvie to Nene and see how things work out that way?
>
> Bottom line: I thought she was trying to avoid the KS, and now it sounds
> like she's gonna knock on the door at the Silky Doll and try to sell them a
> battlemover w/ fusion bomb in exchange for... why expect the KS to exchange
> anything? Only way to stand up to the hardsuits is with the battlemover and
> using it to fight is NOT an option.
>
> That's what threw me. But either she's got an idea I'm not expecting, or
> things just won't go the way she plans. Either way should be interesting :)
>
>
> Remember, unreliable narator here. She doesn't have a plan, or didn't
before this conversation started. What she does have are goals and means,
and a little time to try and figure out the way's to use those means to
reach them. Of course if Priss goes on a murder rampage, and Sylia sends
the KS out to finish off what's left those plans might not matter very
much.
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