[FFML] [Draft 1][Avengers/Marvel Comics] Chapter 4] Siblings, Spiders, and Squirrels! Oh My!

[StudioPc]

On Dec 7, 2012, at 11:46 PM, O David Morgan wrote:

> StudioPc wrote:
>> He pointed at the intern. "Name."
>> 
>> "Chris, Sir. Chris Pow--"
> 
> Aw yeah. One of my all-time favorites. ^_^
> ( Trying not to be too impatient with the cameos, and hoping this can be developed more later, especially as he got promoted to minion. Hehehe. )

Cameo? I have no idea what you mean. Certainly I would never have the main character of the first series I ever regularly collected in a fanfic as a possible supporting character . Ever.  Yup. Would never, ever do that.

Ever. 

>> ---------------------------
>> 
>> While he could only give tips about raising a daughter, he
> > was a gold mine about Peter and Pepper and Tony soaked up every
> > word.
> 
> Er, that series needs punctuation, unless he was a gold mine about (Peter and Pepper and Tony).
> "...he was a gold mine about Peter, and Pepper and Tony soaked up every word." I think is correct, though breaking it into two sentences would probably read better: "...he was a gold mine about Peter. Pepper and Tony soaked up every word."

Ah, thanks. I knew something was wrong with that bit and I couldn't figure out what it was.

> Also, yes, the Castle Doreen threw up on is Rick Castle of the
>> show"Castle", and yes, that's strictly a cameo . . . maybe.
> 
> Thanks for clarifying, I would've assumed Frank Castle, which would have been confusing.

I'm still on the fence about having Frank show up outside of passing mentions by other characters. In my mind, Frank is kind of like Dr. Strange. He's less of a character and more of this "force of nature", for lack of a better term,  that only shows up when needed. 

If you're not watching the show "Castle" though, you should be. It's basically an hour of Nathan Fillion being awesome on a weekly basis. I honestly think he and Tony would get along as only a pair of rich guys with more money than sense could.