[FFML] Gundam Storm, Ch. 3

[Brian Randall]

And now in typical style, this is descending from discussion and into flamebait.

That's quite enough, Lurker -- I know you're eager to leap to the
attack.  Why not use some of that boundless energy on more
constructive criticisms instead of trying to start another fight?
Seriously -- three responses, and all of them trying to engage other
members in argument instead of really talking about the story you're
denying better feedback?

Focus, please.  Discussion is welcome, but it's best if it's relevant
to the topic at hand -- and moreso than petty sniping.  It's too early
in the morning to have to find an admin hat.

On Mon, Mar 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net> wrote:
>> On Sun, Mar 6, 2011 at 6:09 PM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net>
>> wrote:
>>>>>
>>>>> "Yes, Ojousama."
>>>>
>>>> Gratuitous Japanese words do not help a story...
>>>
>>> If you have nothing constructive or substantially contributive to say
>>> about
>>> a story other than "I hate reading fanfics with Japanese words in them",
>>> the
>>> best thing you can do is not bother saying anything at all.
>>
>> Actually, I was really enjoying it up until that point and had some
>> thoughts on the procreation 'dilemma' that was put in place
>> (semi-cloning and tubing technology similar to Weber's tubing) but
>> that really was jarring to suddenly start throwing in 'Old Man' in
>> Japanese for what seems no really good reason.
>
> Considering "ojousama" is "Princess" and not "Old Man", I can see where it
> threw you, but that isn't the writer's problem. :P
>
>
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> Mythril Moth
> www.mythrilmoth.net

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Brian Randall
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Who would really like to have seen 1 reasonable C&C over the fic
instead of the war over fanboy japanese.
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Yare, yare.