[FFML] Gundam Storm, Ch. 3

[Mythril Moth]

> On Sun, Mar 6, 2011 at 6:09 PM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net> 
> wrote:
>>>> "Yes, Ojousama."
>>>
>>> Gratuitous Japanese words do not help a story...
>>
>> If you have nothing constructive or substantially contributive to say 
>> about
>> a story other than "I hate reading fanfics with Japanese words in them", 
>> the
>> best thing you can do is not bother saying anything at all.
>
> Actually, I was really enjoying it up until that point and had some
> thoughts on the procreation 'dilemma' that was put in place
> (semi-cloning and tubing technology similar to Weber's tubing) but
> that really was jarring to suddenly start throwing in 'Old Man' in
> Japanese for what seems no really good reason.

Considering "ojousama" is "Princess" and not "Old Man", I can see where it 
threw you, but that isn't the writer's problem. :P


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