[FFML] Gundam Storm, Ch. 3

[Arthur Hansen]

On Sun, Mar 6, 2011 at 6:09 PM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net> wrote:
>>> "Yes, Ojousama."
>>
>> Gratuitous Japanese words do not help a story...
>
> If you have nothing constructive or substantially contributive to say about
> a story other than "I hate reading fanfics with Japanese words in them", the
> best thing you can do is not bother saying anything at all.

Actually, I was really enjoying it up until that point and had some
thoughts on the procreation 'dilemma' that was put in place
(semi-cloning and tubing technology similar to Weber's tubing) but
that really was jarring to suddenly start throwing in 'Old Man' in
Japanese for what seems no really good reason.

I will admit, I'm really liking this story and take.



-- 
Arthur Hansen