[FFML] [SHnY] The Pillar of Haruhi Suzumiya

[the DragonBard]

Personally, I get the feeling it's another time travel bit.  Not sure if Yuki and Haruhi are the only ones to remember or not though.

> Date: Fri, 29 Jul 2011 00:33:21 -0400
> From: eta.bootis at gmail.com
> To: ffml at chez-vrolet.net
> Subject: Re: [FFML] [SHnY] The Pillar of Haruhi Suzumiya
> 
> > Haruhi looked up at me and from the look on her face I thought she'd surely
> > cut me down at least verbally, if not physically. Then her expression
> > changed and she looked down at the ground. "That might be best." She turned
> > to the girl in glasses with short gray hair. "Yuki, how many students do
> > you need to maintain the literature club?"
> 
> Might consider capitalizing Literature Club?
> 
> > Yuki nodded and Mikuru said. "Oh? Yes indeed, Miss Suzumiya."
> 
> This feels a little awkward in construction.
> 
> 
> I'm almost reminded of Narnia a little bit--as if Haruhi, Yuki, and
> Mikuru fought a thousand-year war and came back to being young and
> youthful.  I know that's probably not what you were going for in so many
> words, but even so, the implication of what happened off-screen seems
> clear, and for something like this that's all that's needed to start
> off.
> 
> What's next?  Koizumi comes in as an old enemy?
> 
> -Michael Clark
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