[FFML] [SHnY] The Pillar of Haruhi Suzumiya

[Michael Clark]

> Haruhi looked up at me and from the look on her face I thought she'd surely
> cut me down at least verbally, if not physically. Then her expression
> changed and she looked down at the ground. "That might be best." She turned
> to the girl in glasses with short gray hair. "Yuki, how many students do
> you need to maintain the literature club?"

Might consider capitalizing Literature Club?

> Yuki nodded and Mikuru said. "Oh? Yes indeed, Miss Suzumiya."

This feels a little awkward in construction.


I'm almost reminded of Narnia a little bit--as if Haruhi, Yuki, and
Mikuru fought a thousand-year war and came back to being young and
youthful.  I know that's probably not what you were going for in so many
words, but even so, the implication of what happened off-screen seems
clear, and for something like this that's all that's needed to start
off.

What's next?  Koizumi comes in as an old enemy?

-Michael Clark