[FFML] [SHnY] Taniguchi and Kunikida are dead.

Michael Clark eta.bootis at gmail.com
Thu Aug 11 19:12:10 PDT 2011


> "I may have seen her at school, but I remember you. You're the boy who
> helped me get the library card."
>
> "Yes, yesterday."
>
> "No, several months ago, back in May."
>
> "It's May now."
>
> "No, it's December."

I think I started laughing uncontrollably at this point.  Goodness, just
what's happened to this timeline?  Will Haruhi realize she knew Sasaki
all along?

Additionally, though these two parts so far, I get a very strong
impression about how much Sasaki cares for Kyon's future, even if it's
with this ever-smiling, stiffly distant sort of way.  I take it to mean
their chemistry is effective, but Haruhi and Sasaki's coldness feels
like its out of nowhere still.  Then again, it's a good source of
conflict, so I don't mind that it's there.  Still, it strikes me as
something that ought to be less equal and more one-sided from Haruhi's
direction, if anything.

Not bad so far, all the same.


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