[FFML] [XOver] Wednesday's Child: Prologue (Tail Kinker)

John Rasmussen lictre at charter.net
Sun Jul 26 09:32:58 PDT 2009


At 04:44 PM 7/25/2009, you wrote:
>I have to say this is rather intersting the way you did the story. 
>its starts out with a real reason for ranma to join the army. it 
>reminds me of ranma goes to war. To bad about akane dying in such an 
>ugly manner though.
>The one thing i found off if ranma being a heavy weapon type person. 
>i see him more of the type to be recon with the way he moves and his 
>training and even then being asked to join the special forces even.
>one thing that you should think about adding if something about hand 
>to hand traaing where the sarge asks ranma to help train everyone 
>else after getting his butt handed to him by ranma though. at least 
>just a thought to add something to the story.
>It is something that you did something about everyone learning about 
>the curse and it was handled very easy at least.
>i am not sure what else i can say about it exect where do you see 
>this going and in 96 did the sdf 1 land yet? i can not remember off hand.
>
>jason walters

First, the Visitor (what gets rebuilt into the SDF-1) canonically 
didn't impact until 1999.

The inclusion of Ranma as assistant for HtH instruction could be 
viewed as so obvious as not to need mentioning, or he might not have 
been asked to assist BECAUSE his way was so radically different from 
the method being taught by the sergeant.

Institutionally, he might be getting considered for Special Forces 
style training, but the early discovery of the gender-shifting could 
be causing drastic reconsideration of that at the command 
level.  Many armies' special forces units are exclusively 
male.  Also, many militaries do not recruit Special Forces types 
directly out of Basic Training.  They wait for experience and 
performance reviews to show who could be considered the best prospects.

Ranma's role as pig-man may have been recommended as the result of 
his test and performance scores, as well as conversations with his 
sergeant and other trainers.  Frankly, Ranma's physical confidence 
could be a liability to a scout, since what he may not consider a 
significant threat might cause a 30 minute running battle for a 
company.  A scout would be well advised to err on the side of caution 
for the amount of force to be applied, or where and how a body of men 
should move.




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