[FFML] [Mai Hime, Future] The Summer of Her Discontent--It Was a Beautiful Dream
Bert Miller
hkmiller at theeddy.com
Tue Jul 28 05:34:24 PDT 2009
The biology lab looked very well equipped; definitely the
students were
getting their money's worth, even if most of them clearly didn't
enjoy
dissecting frogs.
Here, for instance, I would expect Alyssa to get a bit more
concrete, perhaps noting a few specific instruments not common to
high schools.
| Any suggestions? I don't know biology work well enough to be sure
what to put. ^^;;
I had to think about it a bit How about:
"The biology lab looked very well equipped; I noted a Suzushiro Biotech
Gene Sequencer in one corner, and a Genom Embrywomb next to it. When I
was in high school biology, we dissected frogs, and I think most
Japanese high school students still do, but apparently here they've
moved on to cloning tadpoles. I'm not sure I completely approve; we
learned valuable lessons about how reality and textbooks illustrations
differ, and about getting our hands dirty, when I was that age, which
these children miss."
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