[FFML] [Mai Hime] The Sword of the Lord (Full I hope)

[Alex Tomas]

Another great chapter.  I saw some minor grammatical errors, but I'm not in
the mood to be another Alyssa; besides, they don't detract from the story.

The thing that sticks out for me in this chapter is the hate Nao has for
Shizuru.  Part of it has been explained in the story (ie. Shizuru not
atoning for her sins like Nao is), but I feel there is something more to
it.  It's not like anyone made her (Nao) atone for her sins, or so I assume,
so it's not like she can hold it against Shizuru.  Maybe Nao wants
something, or someone, that Shizuru has.  There are hints that Nao wants to
have someone.  Then again, who knows.  Oh, well, thanks for this and I
eagerly await the next installment.

In the meantime, I'll rewatch the last few episodes.
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