[FFML] [SleeplessDomain] Magical Girl Impostor Syndrome

[Adrian Tymes]

I haven't completely stopped writing, though my works go here and
there these days.  But now I have one I could use help with.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/14373915

The base idea came easily enough, but when I wrote it down it was all
tell, no show.  I tried fitting bits of show back in - description of
background actions, and emoting as well as talking.  I wonder if there
is some other general approach I could take.

This isn't the only fic where I am running into this problem.  Lots of
exposition, lots of plot which is formed and resolved by people
talking - but then it's just talking, and thus bland.

Also, while I'm feeding the list:
https://archiveofourown.org/works/14017833 - shipping of what may be
among the easiest shipping targets in all fandom.