[FFML] [Fanfic][Draft 1][DC Comics] Not a Hero - Part 1

[Adrian Tymes]

Nice, but you seem to be missing a few "s.  I'd suggest going over this,
looking for each " and parenthesis to make sure they match up.

On Mar 22, 2016 1:06 AM, "Ragman Jack" <studiopc at sbcglobal.net> wrote:
> “Is this or good or bad?” Chloe asked.

Extra or there?

Also, wouldn't Hal and/or Clark recognize each other in this case?
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