[FFML] [www][fanfic][MLP:FiM] Tomodachi wa Mahoushoujo @ MythrilMoth.net and FiMFiction.net!
Mythril Moth
mythrilmoth at mythrilmoth.net
Sun Jun 1 13:17:37 PDT 2014
On 6/1/2014 3:08 PM, Adrian Tymes wrote:
> A bit generic so far, but then, you're just starting up/setting up.
> Though it might have been better to follow the order the original
> series had Twilight meet them in: Rainbow's reaction to this situation
> is predictable, but Pinkie's reaction in Rainbow's place - her
> determined cheerfulness even when the world throws this sort of thing
> at her - would be character establishing right from the start.
Every single AU fic or comic out there, EVER, has Twilight meet Pinkie
Pie first. Every. Single. One. The first rule of breaking out of cliche
traps is to avoid doing the same thing everyone else does. Besides, I
have different plans for Pinkie Pie. :)
And yeah, first chapter is just setting the tone and laying some
foundations. Next couple of chapters will establish the identity of the
story.
Thanks for reading!
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