[FFML] [www][fanfic][MLP:FiM] Tomodachi wa Mahoushoujo @ MythrilMoth.net and FiMFiction.net!

[Adrian Tymes]

On Sun, Jun 1, 2014 at 12:38 PM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at mythrilmoth.net>
wrote:

> http://www.mythrilmoth.net/fimg/index.html
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A bit generic so far, but then, you're just starting up/setting up.  Though
it might have been better to follow the order the original series had
Twilight meet them in: Rainbow's reaction to this situation is predictable,
but Pinkie's reaction in Rainbow's place - her determined cheerfulness even
when the world throws this sort of thing at her - would be character
establishing right from the start.
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