[FFML] [www][fanfic][MLP:FiM] Turducken @ MythrilMoth.net (plus general updates)

[Adrian Tymes]

On Tue, Nov 26, 2013 at 3:30 PM, Mythril Moth
<mythrilmoth at mythrilmoth.net>wrote:

> As to your specific comments, pretty much everything you pointed out is
> purely stylistic and variable.


Yeah, and it works.  Just offering from my perspective.  (I didn't comment
where I agree completely with the style.  For instance, the accents you did
are things I've done myself, and they work IMO.)


> The one instance of the color orange in the story is just me being silly.


Silly?  In MLP?  :P


> The "Quobblck" thing...yeah, it doesn't really evoke the chicken as much
> as it could, but it's the best thing I could come up with for what the
> sound this thing might actually make is. Adding any extra letters to it
> wouldn't really make it pop, or I'd have worked a rooster's crow in there
> somewhere. :/
>

But it's a turducken, not a turduckooster.  ;)


> Besides, it's a six-legged fire-breathing bird. Show it some respect! ^_-
>

It would have a place of honor on a dinner table.  For a few minutes.
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