[FFML] [C&C] Addendum to C&C on Hearts and Minds

[Mythril Moth]

> Okay, just to be clear, in part 5 (I think it was), Biaozi offered him 
> the amulet, said keep this with you and I'll be able to track you by  it, 
> and told him that if he didn't accept the offer she'd be able to  get 
> someone else to do it. He agreed, then disposed of the amulet as  soon as 
> he got out of sight. Unknown to him, it was set to mark him  just from his 
> having carried it a little ways, so that he'd still be  detectable even 
> without it.
>
> So I don't know if I'd call what he did THAT terribly stupid; he 
> basically just underestimated how good of a magic item an Amazon could 
> come up with. I'll have to give this some thought. I have no qualms  about 
> changing the story, even if I have to go back four chapters and  rewrite 
> from there, but I'm not quite sure at this point that it's  necessary.

It still doesn't quite hold that Genma would outright betray his own party 
like that. He's a bastard, but he's not a suicidal bastard.


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