[FFML] [Fic] [Magic Kaito] Four Things That Never Happened To Nakamori Aoko (4/4)

[the DragonBard]

Very interesting story.

I didn't see any grammar or spelling errors, and my knowledge of Magic Kaito is just this side of non-existent.

Personally, I would have liked it if there had been some mention of the reaction when the public finds out how much the father forsook his family for his career.  Him being disgraced in some way.

But that's just me.
 		 	   		  
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