[FFML] frozen butteryfly

[skychan]

Well, if you think about it Irene has just as much motivation for revenge
on Genom as her sister did. Vision lost a sister, Irene lost a fiance.
Either one can be working to punish Genom before taking over the Hou Bang.
Yes I'm admitting early that Vision is going to have a regular career but
hey.  Thank's for your comments.  I'm actually going to rewrite this
chapter into third person I believe just to make things clearer that we are
for the moment out of Kari's head.



On Fri, Jan 18, 2013 at 2:03 PM, J. w. <sacranoidclub at yahoo.com> wrote:

> Hey sky-chan.
> Its jason, I have talked to you a few times about your story in the past
> over little things about that setup. So far this chapter as it sits works
> from a point of veiw of nene. I think that one chapter from her pont of
> veiw would be a good idea to see whats happens while kari in under the
> wearther you could say. As for sliva asctions thay are from her point of
> veiw good in leeeping the team alive though. But its going to werid when
> kari starts talking about herself and nene is waachting the programing as
> she talks though. It is very intersting to se the story from a different
> point of veiw though in how things have changed that irean is still alive
> though....which is going to change the later chaper with vision....
> jason
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