[FFML] frozen butteryfly

[J. w.]

Hey sky-chan. 
Its jason, I have talked to you a few times about your story in the past over little things about that setup. So far this chapter as it sits works from a point of veiw of nene. I think that one chapter from her pont of veiw would be a good idea to see whats happens while kari in under the wearther you could say. As for sliva asctions thay are from her point of veiw good in leeeping the team alive though. But its going to werid when kari starts talking about herself and nene is waachting the programing as she talks though. It is very intersting to se the story from a different point of veiw though in how things have changed that irean is still alive though....which is going to change the later chaper with vision....
jason
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