[FFML] frozen butterfly

[skychan]

Thank you.

I'm trying very hard to avoid falling into any of the tropes that are too
obvious and typical without reason.  In particular the totally
misunderstood, innocent 33-S boomers Sylvie and Anri.  Don't mind the
murders...

Hopefully when we get back to them I can do a competent job of it and I am
going to try to get the next bit out quicker due to having a true
cliffhanger of an ending on this chapter.



On Tue, Dec 10, 2013 at 8:23 PM, J. w. <sacranoidclub at yahoo.com> wrote:

>
> I liked where the new chapter was going. The only real thing I could
> comment is kari being asked on her date was a very hard read. But I
> undertstand that the other girl was doing a rush of trying to ask her out
> in one long breath. I am bummed cause the email cut off everything jus as
> kari meet nana and was ordered to stop.....sigh, I suck at finding little
> mistaked like other people, but if nothing else I can offer moral support
> for the story at least. Itresting the way you are doing the weird outlook
> that the s33s  have towards the norms of life. Everyone else in every fic
> with them always theart them with human outlooks. It is very different and
> nice to see a totaly different take on the girls withe vapire murders.
> Thanks.
> Jason
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