[FFML] frozen butterfly

[J. w.]

I liked where the new chapter was going. The only real thing I could comment is kari being asked on her date was a very hard read. But I undertstand that the other girl was doing a rush of trying to ask her out in one long breath. I am bummed cause the email cut off everything jus as kari meet nana and was ordered to stop.....sigh, I suck at finding little mistaked like other people, but if nothing else I can offer moral support for the story at least. Itresting the way you are doing the weird outlook that the s33s  have towards the norms of life. Everyone else in every fic with them always theart them with human outlooks. It is very different and nice to see a totaly different take on the girls withe vapire murders. Thanks.
Jason