[FFML] Mobile Suit Gundam Storm, Chapter 4 (Draft)

[Arthur Hansen]

On Sat, Mar 19, 2011 at 11:06 PM, Andrew Dynon <adynon at internode.on.net> wrote:
> Personal Log – Athene Gold

Nothing really to mention here other than that I have no real feel for
what New Moscow actually looks like on Mars (domes? skyscrappers?
Underground?) and the such. Things do look pretty good from a plot
point, though I will have to admit that I'm not fond of the first
person perspective. That's probably just because I can write third
person much easier and it sounds more natural to me.

When you mention the scene of the LaGrange point... I have no idea if
you are referring to a space-station or ships that just happen to be
there. I'm assuming a space-station, but I have no idea of look, size,
population? I'm assuming big enough for the MS you described (they
kinda give me the ZAKU vibe, strangely) but nothing beyond that.

-- 
Arthur Hansen