[FFML] Gundam Storm, Ch. 3

[DB Sommer]

On 3/6/2011 8:09 PM, Mythril Moth wrote:
>>> "Yes, Ojousama."
>>
>> Gratuitous Japanese words do not help a story...
>
> If you have nothing constructive or substantially contributive to say 
> about a story other than "I hate reading fanfics with Japanese words 
> in them", the best thing you can do is not bother saying anything at all.

No, excessive use of Japanese terms can be distracting. It is of course 
opinion what constitutes gratuitous, but it's a valid critcism

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