[FFML] [SYnY] [Lovecraft] The Shadow over Nishinomiya, chapter four

[Henry Cobb]

On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 12:05 PM, Michael Clark <eta.bootis at gmail.com> wrote:
> I like Yuki's backstory here, but I felt it was a bit weak to have
> Kyon's sister go into the "Deep One" vs. "kappa" distinction when Yuki
> had just finished doing that.  Aside from making it clear that his
> sister knows what Yuki is, it feels like we're just hearing what we
> already know again.
>
> -Michael Clark

Thanks and well taken. I might as well chop that bit and move it to
much later on.

-HJC