[FFML] [fanfic][lime][Yotsuba&/Pretty Neighbor] Miura & FirstLove

[Matt Knudsen]

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On Aug 23, 2011, at 6:25 AM, "Mythril Moth" <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net> wrote:

>>> "I still kinda am too, even though--" She trailed off, then shrugged. "It
>> 
>> This "She" does not match to the last named or indicated female?
> 
> A typographical error which has now been corrected. Thank you for spotting it.
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>> Perhaps you can see why some writers on this list have fled to the first person?
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> Yes, because a single misplaced pronoun within the body of a work of significant length is total justification for abandoning the most logical, sensible, and accessible narrative style for writing prose in favor of a style that ballchokes the writer and forces him to write the entire work from the viewpoint of a single character, thus completely eliminating the possibility of scenes in which said character is not present.
> 
> You are as correct as you usually are on this. I salute your consistent standard of expert analysis.
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