[FFML] [fanfic][Sailormoon][dark] Moonshadow, chapter 17 (repost)

[Michael Gilson]

Very gripping, with an excellent climax to the tension you've been  
building about Makoto's kidnapping.  Also lays quite a few hooks for  
future installments, like Luna's discovery at Tokyo Tower, what is  
Usagi's plan to use Mamoru to help Makoto's situation and who is the  
man with the skull ring.
Speaking of him, I wonder how he knew they weren't really Triad.  I  
assume it's because he has actual direct knowledge of triads where  
Aritsuka really didn't have any more than the girls did and probably  
from the same sources.  I hope he didn't have cameras in Okuda's  
place as well as Aritsuka's office because if he did he knows that  
Makoto is Jupiter and Rei is one of the other senshi.  Even if the  
only cameras were the ones at Aritsuka's, if they had sound recording  
he probably knows Rei is involved.

Michael Gilson

On Mar 20, 2010, at 3:13 AM, Mythril Moth wrote:

>
> Seeing as  (a) the FFML has recently had issues, (b) I haven't  
> received a
> SINGLE COMMENT on this chapter since posting it, and (c) I edited  
> it to take
> care of one last detail I forgot to address in the wrapup, I've  
> decided to
> repost it.
>
>
>
> C&C appreciated. The final version will go up sometime before the  
> end of the
> month. Previous chapters can be read at www.mythrilmoth.net.
>

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