[FFML] [Mai Hime, Future] Road Trip Revision Effort Two

[John Biles]

On Tue, May 19, 2009 at 11:25 AM, Michael Gilson <mgilson at mchsi.com> wrote:

> Great stuff.  One nit, since this scene is from Crystal's viewpoint,
> shouldn't the last sentence be: "Kagami-san and I are dating now,"
> Shun said.
>


Yes.  Wow, I don't know how I did that.  ^^;;
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