[FFML] [Mai Hime, Future] Road Trip Revision Effort Two

[Michael Gilson]

Great stuff.  One nit, since this scene is from Crystal's viewpoint,  
shouldn't the last sentence be: "Kagami-san and I are dating now,"  
Shun said.

Michael Gilson /8^{)
On May 19, 2009, at 3:25 AM, John Biles wrote:

>     Mitsu-san and Shun now came around the side of the building.   
> Mitsu-san
> looked like she could power half of Japan with her smile.
>
>     "I see you two had a good time," Natasha said, grinning.
>
>     "Wonderful," Kagami said.
>
>     "Kagami-san and I are dating now," I said.

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