[FFML] [fanfic][Sailormoon] Moonshadow 14 (random prattle)

[H. Torrance Griffin]

--- On Thu, 7/16/09, The Eternal Lost Lurker <lurkerdrome at sbcglobal.net> wrote:

> From: The Eternal Lost Lurker <lurkerdrome at sbcglobal.net>
> Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][Sailormoon] Moonshadow 14 (random prattle)
> To: "The Fanfiction Mailing List" <ffml at chez-vrolet.net>
> Date: Thursday, July 16, 2009, 8:13 PM
> >> (The majority of this
> chapter has been written for about 8
> >> months. I just
> >> wasn't quite happy with it, but now I realize it's
> about as
> >> ready as it's
> >> ever going to be. It also has no title yet.)
> >
> > Perfectionism. I can relate.
> 
> Actually, no. It just felt like this chapter kind of fell
> flat on the road 
> and kept waiting for the Plot Bus to run it over. It
> just...took a really, 
> really long time for the bus to come. :P

Ow.  Even worse.

> >> She was right. As usual.
> >>
> >> This was really far too easy.
> >
> > Hobby?  Or am I forgetting some killings mixed up
> with this.
> 
> Building a character quirk. Points to anyone who calls it
> before I out it. 
> :)

Gah, secret vice for Outland TV....

> Also, I don't use spellcheck software. I actually PROOFREAD
> MY STUFF. :P 
> Yes, I know, that went out of style in the 90s, but I'm
> old-fashioned.

Point.  I try both when I am working on major things.

> >> A rough hand seized her chin. "Now, you still owe
> me two
> >> hours. With
> >> interest. And my nakama are VERY interested..."
> >
> > You know that browbeating over abuse of power?  I
> think Serenity and co. 
> > would let it slide this once.
> 
> Unfortunately, they've got her a bit too drugged to even
> remember to 
> transform...

Damn.

Of course the same observation applies after the fact.

> > I do hope that, if she is at all interested in a
> medical career, she will 
> > avoid fields where a bedside manner is expected.
> 
> And where, precisely, is it ever hinted that she has any
> such goal? :P

True.  Still using carryover from BSSM.

> >> "There is no mistake," Jadeite replied, frowning
> severely.
> >> "I had believed
> >> that monster dead and buried in the dust of the
> Moon.
> >> Nevertheless, he is
> >> alive, now, in the human city of Tokyo."
> >
> > Oh this guy is popular....
> 
> You have NO idea.

Are we going to end up rooting for Beryl's Goon Squad if they get him alone?

> >> Beryl screamed.
> >
> > Perhaps she has a few problems of her own then?
> 
> Again, you have NO idea...

Demonic forces are not your friend.

> 
> > Nice to see this continue.
> 
> Thanks for reading!

My pleasure.

HTG