[FFML] [PEANUTS] It's good to be the Queen, Charlie Brown

[Jacob Hansen]

I don't think I've ever even heard of Peanuts fanfiction before now.  This
was pretty awesome though.  I was in the middle of a project and just
glancing through the digest and wound up reading this whole fic.

WARNING:  THERE IS A LOT OF BASEBALL IN THIS FIC.
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> A WHOLE LOT.
>

No kidding.

Admittedly the baseball did start to drag on, but I kind of think it works,
since the game itself was dragging on (and on and on and on) too.

Only one issue jumped out at me, here:


>    "It's not that," he said.  "It's that Lucy wants to blindfold me."  That
> rarely *lead* to anything good.
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>
>
and here:


>    Charlie Brown let himself be *lead* out of the car eventually and across
> a
> lawn and into a house;
>

(emphasis mine)

 Rather than "lead" it should be "led."  I wasn't originally sure, but the
dictionary backed up my instinct.

Pretty minor, but there you are.  Awesome story.
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