[FFML] [multi-series X-over] Project: S.H.O.D.A.N, prologue

[Chen Yong]

Hmm. I'm not sure which story you're reading, but if it's the one I wrote, I don't seem to recall any established characters, much less "everyone", getting steamrollered/beaten up by any main character.> Date: Thu, 16 Oct 2008 07:04:48 -0700> From: rgeiger2001 at yahoo.com> To: ffml at chez-vrolet.net> Subject: Re: [FFML] [multi-series X-over] Project: S.H.O.D.A.N, prologue> > > >  Hmmm... I'm definatly getting an Author Avatar/Self-Insert vibe on this. Ultra-powerful main character who can steamroll established characters? Check. I believe you should scale back on that and focus on exploring the various setting with the character rather than beating everyone up. Ex: In Dragonball, a character would have to negotiatre with Bulma in order to convince the heavies to find the Dragonballs for a certain purpose. 
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