[FFML] [Fanfic] [RWBY] [CYOA] [AU] Ariel's Story

Ariel Schnee weissschnee at comcast.net
Tue Oct 31 12:11:09 PDT 2017


Disclaimer: RWBY is not my creation and is owned by Rooster Teeth. Ariel 
Schnee is my OC and is owned by me. The Dark Patron is my creation and is 
owned by me.



AN : This was made using my own custom Ariel's Special Version RWBY CYOA 1.3 
now. Here's some info. 
http://nightgazer.altervista.org/Ariel's_RWBY_CYOA/Ariel's_Special_Version_RWBY_CYOA.htm . 
My CYOA was made by combining stuff from different CYOAs. When I look for a 
CYOA to get Advantages and Disadvantages from I go on Google looking for 
CYOAs and click the 'Images' button at the top. Then I click on the CYOA 
images that appear there. Sometimes this works and sometimes it doesn't. 
Many picture links are broken. Some of the page links return 404 errors to 
me then. This is why I didn't name the creators of some of the CYOAs. The 
pages wouldn't link in and I couldn't get their names. Hope that this helps 
you out some.

AN2 : Since I believe in giving credit where credit is due the rebirth scene 
and a few others are taken from "Spirit Within", "Spirit Within II", and 
"Spirit Within III" a series of Ranma 1/2 fanfics written by Sean D'anna. 
You can find them here. 
http://web.archive.org/web/20090213105546/http://asynjor.com/fanfic/index.html . 
And yes, I did get his permission to use such scenes in a fic I was working 
on long ago. I never did finish that fic, but I'll use them in this one.

AN3 : The 'Online RWBY CYOA Complete Form' does not exist, I know; I 
checked.



Ariel's Story

by

Ariel Schnee



Prologue



??/??/20??

Hi! My name is -----. You don't need to know my last name.

It was just a nice night in the house. I had just, a little while ago, woken 
up. And I was still a little tired. Well, maybe a bit feverish too. Alright, 
I was burning up and could barely keep my eyes open now. I needed to see a 
doctor tomorrow.

I was currently sitting in front of my comp playing a very heavily modded 
Skyrim. I -love- the custom character mod, and the TARDIS mod, and the 
modern weapons mod too.

Then I decided to take a break from being the dovahkiin and started browsing 
through the web instead. I went to Google and typed in 'RWBY Series', just 
to see what I would get. My attention was caught by a link that said 'Online 
RWBY CYOA Complete Form' and I wondered what it was.

Clicking the link brought me to a site that had what appeared to be a custom 
version of a RWBY CYOA and little boxes you fill out to make your choices. I 
was curious about this so, I thought I would give it a try. I didn't have 
anything better to do at the moment.

Now if the room would just stop spinning. Spin, spin, spin, spin, spin. 
Wheee! Hahahahahahaha!

Then I sneezed out a large volume of snot and coughed up... something. I'm 
not sure what. It was purple, green, and yellow... and it started to eat 
through the floor producing a hissing sound.

'Oh, I don't feel so good.' I thought.

I turned my attention back to the comp. Since this was all a game I decided 
to just choose things by hitting random buttons and filling in things. It's 
not like any of this was actually gonna happen.

KRACKA-THOOM!

"Odd." I said. "Ah don' remember anythin' 'bout a thunderstorm. Rain, rain, 
rain, rain, rain!"

I made my choices.

"Wheee, there are so many colors everywhere and they taste and sound funny 
too!" I exclaimed while smiling like a demented loon.

The screen was getting a bit fuzzy.

I giggled sickly.

The pencil holder on the desk waved at me.

"Wheee!" I shouted gleefully waving back at it.

Ah. The little box popped up again. Well, looks I was done filling this 
thing out.

"Excellent." I say in imitation of a Mondasian Cyberman.

I stretched and yawned, wondering what to do next. Maybe I should watch 'Die 
Hard' or 'Rainbow Rocks'. One had some real cool action and neat stunts, the 
other had Sunset Shimmer. Yeah, no contest here pal. I reached for my 
'Rainbow Rocks' dvd.

"Gimme mah Sunset!" I shouted joyfully while multi-colored sweat poured down 
my face. "Yeah, Sunset! She's so cute!"

Another box popped up saying 'press'. I stared at it. I could barely see 
what it said. I barely managed to move my hand toward the mouse, and clicked 
it.

It was a little difficult, what with some fingers having fallen off.

'Ah suppose ah should be worried 'bout that?' I thought. Then I dismissed 
the thought. Everything was so hazy, and it was easier not to think much.

Another box popped up saying 'your choices have been made. universal 
insertion will now commence. bye bye now, have fun!'

There is a sudden disorientation and I pass out, my body slowly starting to 
dissolve into a puddle of rainbow colored goo.

Then a bright flash of light occurs.

And then I am gone.

---



Darkness was all I could see. I could not move and it had been so for a long 
time. I occupied this time by playing back the many memories of my past 
life. 'Perhaps this is what Heaven is.' I thought. I felt very warm and 
secure. Then everything changed; behind me I felt something give.

I felt something push me forward and crush me. I tried to breathe but no air 
could be found, I writhed as I felt the world shift forward, in a panic I 
began to struggle. The walls around me began to close together.

'Oh God! I've gone to Hell!' I thought desperately. I felt something grip my 
head hard and pull. I felt cool air on the top of my head and tried to open 
my eyes, but they seemed sealed shut. I felt myself being lifted into the 
air by my feet and bright lights surrounded me.

A sudden pain came across my back and I saw a large colorful blur move 
towards me. I registered speech in the air and I realized what had happened. 
I had just been born. I began to scream.

The only sound I could make.

---

Some Months Later



A few months later I lay in my crib. I listened to the voices coo and coddle 
me. And the shapes that started to focus around me became clearer. Soon I 
was beginning to recognize them but they were still blurry, and my instinct 
was lessening so I was no longer so attracted to mere movement. Then one day 
I woke up and saw two faces clearly as my eyes finally began to focus 
clearly. I looked up at the faces looking down on me. One was calm and 
loving, and the other was jovial and loving as well.

The woman, my new mother, looked at me and said "Aren't you the sweetest 
thing my dear little girl."

'Girl?' I thought. 'Girl?! What the fuck?!'

The man, my new father, looked at me and said "You're the most perfect 
little angel of a girl there ever was my dear Ariel."

'Ariel?' I thought. 'Ariel?!. My name is Ariel?'

Mother looked at father and said "She is so wonderful Jacques."

Father smiled at her and said "That she is indeed my dear Snowfall."

'Jacques?' I thought. 'Snowfall? Am I in France? That... could be 
interesting. France is supposed to have a wild club scene too, right?'

Mother looked at me while smiling and said "My dear little Ariel Schnee. You 
will do great things one day. And bring fame to our family."

Father also looked at me, smiling with pride, and said "That she will my 
dear. Both her and her twin sister Weiss. They will make the Schnee name 
great."

'Weiss?' I thought. 'Twin sister? Schnee? Schnee?! Schnee!'

I just lay there in shock as I realized where I was.

'I've been reincarnated into the Schnee family.' I thought. 'As Weiss's twin 
sister. I'm on Remnant! The death world... Oh bloody Hell.'

I did the only thing I could do.

I opened my mouth.

And I screamed.

---

Timeskip



The young girl known as Ariel stood up in the crib and looked at the door as 
she thought of her new family. Her childish joy disappeared as she looked at 
the world with forty-five year old wisdom.

Emotionally she was still seven months old, and she knew it. She had all the 
desires and feelings of a seven month old baby. But her knowledge had 
remained the same. She knew how to talk, write, drink, ride a bike... both 
kinds bicycle and hog, drive a car, how to get a good deal in Northern 
Louisiana, how to please a woman...

'I don't think I'm going to be doing that for a couple decades or so' she 
thought.


Ect., ect..

But more importantly she now knew how to fight. The 'Domestic Martial Arts 
Package' had worked. And she now had the knowledge of a Grandmaster of 
Domestic Martial Arts.

She just had to train this new body, and that would take years. She lay back 
down and went to sleep. 'I'm going to need to start training.' she thought 
as she drifted off.

---

Two years later...



As soon as she turned two she had begun basic martial arts training on her 
new body. Very basic stretching mostly to help with her flexibility when she 
was older. She of course knew how to do the exercises on herself having the 
knowledge stuffed into her head. However, she had to be careful. She could 
seriously hurt herself, or even stunt her own growth if she pushed herself 
too far at such an early age.

---

Quite a few years pass...



Ariel Schnee sat at her desk and sighed as she began her first day of school 
in over four decades. 'Bored.' she thought. 'Bored. I'm sooo bored.'

She looked to her sister equally bored.

She answered with "Here." when the teacher called her name.

Her sister answered as well.

She was busy thinking of other things, like how she missed playing Skyrim 
with mods, when a name was called that got her attention.

"Ruby Rose." called the teacher.

"Here." answered a red-haired girl wearing red.

As she stared at Ruby a strange blue glow formed around the girl that only 
Ariel could see. It was strong like hers while everyone else's was weak, not 
up to their level now.

Ariel just stared at her. 'So.' she thought. 'It's you Ruby Rose. And 
judging by that glow... You're the only one here who could survive my 
training. Well. This is... rather unexpected really.'

---

Ruby was sitting alone in the playground. Such as was usual for her. All the 
others shunned her for 'being a weirdo'.

Her big sister Yang wasn't here. She was at another school.

'I'm so bored.' she thought. 'If only Yang was here. We could have some 
fun.'

She was interrupted in her brooding when another girl dragged a cinder block 
into the area. Then another one. Then another. And another. And another.

The girl then stacked all five blocks atop each other. She then turned to 
Ruby and said "Watch."

Such was the... presence of the girl that Ruby did as she was told.

The girl then punched the top of the top block. All the blocks cracked, 
broke, and crumbled into dust. The girl then turned and smiled at her.

Ruby just gawked and gaped.

The girl said "I know what you are thinking. And no. I do -not- have an 
Awakened Aura or Semblance."

'Which is actually true.' the girl thought to herself. 'My Aura hasn't been 
Awakened yet. And until it is I can't develop the Family Semblance.'

Ruby just stared at the girl and said in a quiet voice "T.T..Then 
H.H....How???"

The girl looked at her and said "Anyone can get that way. Well, if they're 
healthy enough. Even without an Awakened Aura or a Semblance. All it takes 
is training. And training. And training. And training. And training. And 
training. And training. And training. And training. ... You get the idea 
now."

Ruby just nodded dumbly. She was stunned. That was... impressive.

The girl said "Would you like to be able to do that too? I can teach you to 
be a Marital Artist like me. Just accept me as your teacher and I will, 
after some years, have you doing stuff that most Hunters and Huntresses 
would gawk at."

Ruby got wide eyes and said "Me? But, I'm just an ordinary girl. I don't 
have an Awakened Aura yet. Or a Semblance. I can't possibly become strong 
like you."

The girl said "Yes you can."

Ruby said "How can you possibly know that?"

The girl said "You are the only one who can. No one else here can survive my 
training. I have seen it in your soul."

Ruby just looked at the cinder blocks, to the girl, back to the blocks, back 
to the girl. And then nodded. "Alright. I will then. I accept you as my 
teacher now."

"Cool!" said the girl. "Mah first student! Yippee! Oh, by the way. Mah 
name's Ariel Schnee, Grandmaster of the Schnee School of Domestic Martial 
Arts and High Priestess of the Sisterhood of Darkness and Shadows."

Ruby just blinked and asked "High Priestess of the what?"

Ariel just smiled at her and said "Ah'll tell ya when ya'll are older."

Ruby just stared. Then she pouted at having to wait.

'Dawwwww...' Ariel thought. 'So adorable.'

Watching the two of them was a girl who looked like Ariel.

'What are you up to sister?' thought Weiss.

---

Some years pass...



Ruby just looked at Ariel and asked "Sensei, what are those?"

Ariel said "Rats.", and began her task.

Ruby flinched and asked "Why are you tying LIVE RATS in my hair?!"

Ariel just smiled, and hit the rats with a mild taser. The rats shrieked, 
and went active. Clawing, biting... active.

Then Ariel leapt to the next roof and said "If ya keep runnin', leapin', an 
roof hopping ya should stay ahead of them. Slow down though. They will 
bite."

Ruby yelled and started roof hopping to get ahead of the rats.

Nearby Weiss was watching.

'You're weird sister.' she thought.

---



Ruby looked around the clearing and asked "Sensei, why are we out here now?"

Ariel just smiled and said "Here, hold this." and had Ruby pick up a couch.

Ruby just looked at the couch above her head and asked "Sensei, why am I 
holding a couch?"

Ariel then leapt onto the couch causing Ruby to grunt and ask "A couch 
with -you- on it?"

Ariel said "All part of your training." while holding a rope.

Ruby looked at the rope hanging over the side of the couch, down onto the 
ground, and into the bushes. "Sensei?" she asked.

"Hmmm?" inquired Ariel.

"What's the rope for?" asked Ruby.

"Oh." said Ariel. "Mmmm... It releases the wolves."

"WOLVES?" asked Ruby.

"All part of your training." said Ariel. "Now. Run." as she pulled on the 
rope.

A pack of snarling, hungry, feral wolves walked out of the bushes.

They spotted Ruby.

And started drooling in hunger.

Ruby started running. Oh yeah. Did she ever start running.

"SENSEI, YOU BITCH!" shrieked Ruby as she ran, the wolves nipping at her 
flesh.

Nearby, in a tree, Weiss was watching.

'You have... odd ideas of training sister.' she thought.

---



"Sensei?" asked Ruby. "Why are we here, in this old building?"

"You're here to learn the Ja Jinku no Apache technique." said Ariel.

"What's that?" asked Ruby.

"Well." said Ariel. "I lock ya in this room, blindfolded, with live 
rattlesnakes. It is to teach ya how to anticipate when something is about to 
move and strike at ya. Ya will know when the snakes are about to lunge then. 
Try not to get bitten. These are live snakes and haven't had their poison 
glands drained. I doubt there any hospitals in this city that have the 
needed proper antivenin."

"W...W...W...W...WHAT?!" shrieked Ruby who noticed her sensei was opening 
the lid of a container and jumping back from it as out of the lid poured... 
live rattlesnakes.

Her sensei then quickly put a blindfold on her and Ruby could hear her 
sensei running for the door. "Hey Ruby, Ah'm sure ya'll do fine. Just 
remember not to get bitten." And then her sensei opening the door. And then 
her sensei closing the door.

Then Ruby felt something brush against her leg and heard it hiss. She stood 
very still. Then a snake leapt at her. She dodged, barely. Then another. She 
dodged, mostly.

Then many started leaping at her.

Suddenly time seemed to slow down, she could hear as the snake was about to 
move, and she could almost tell where they were.

She dodged, flawlessly. And again. And again. And again. And again.

---

A few hours later...



Ariel opened the door and watched as Ruby effortlessly dodged snake after 
snake after snake after snake after snake. Then she released the gas into 
the room that knocked them out. She went in and removed the blindfold from 
Ruby.

"Good work my student." she said. "Ya have done well. Come with me. This 
calls for a bit of a celebration! I'll treat ya to dinner at Cookie House!"

Ruby just looked at her and said "Sensei, 
you -CENSORED- -CENSORED- -CENSORED- -CENSORED- -CENSORED-."

>From above, in the rafters, Weiss was watching.

'Thank all the gods you never offered to train me sister.' Weiss thought. 
'Wow, that Ruby can curse. I've never heard of some of those words before.'

---



Ariel said "Today I will teach ya the 'pluck-rice-out-of-boiling-water' 
technique."

---

Ruby winced as she bandaged her red hands.

---



Ariel said "Today I will teach ya the 'create-energy-tornado' technique."

---

Ruby screamed as she was sucked into the tornado.

---



Ariel said "Today I will teach ya the 'fire-energy-projectile' technique."

---



Ruby hissed as she bandaged the burns from the ki blasts located on her 
body.

---



Ariel smiled at Ruby as the party started up and said "To us, the birthday 
girls! We're... Well, Ah'm twelve. Ya are ten."

Ruby giggled, rather hysterically though, and said "I survived to see ten. I 
survived... I survived!" More giggling happened. Then she laughed. The kind 
of laugh you hear a survivor make. When they realize the danger is over, for 
the moment, and they -have- -survived-.

Ariel looked over and saw Weiss.

"Hiya there sis!" she exclaimed happily.

Ruby noticed her and said "Hey Weissie!"

Weiss twitched slightly and then put on a practiced expression. She turned 
to her sister and her sister's "student".

'Hello crazy loon and little red menace.' she thought.

Outloud she said "Greetings sister. And greetings to you as well Ruby." 
while performing a proper greeting gesture. She made sure to do it 
correctly. She had an image to maintain afterall.

Ariel made a face and said "Sheesh sis, you don't have ta act so garsh darn 
fancy around us. I'm yer kin and Ruby's yer friend. Relax."

Ruby nodded and said "Yeah Weissie. Leave all that formal junk for the other 
people."

Weiss winced. Both at her sister's crude speech and Ruby's infernal twisting 
of her name.

'Why do my sister and her student have to be such uncultured barbarians?' 
she thought.

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CYOA Build Here

RWBY

Reincarnation

Ariel Schnee - Weiss Schnee's Twin Sister

---

'Time to Awaken - random'

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Handedness

Ambidextrous

---

Autoget

Advantages = Out of Context Power -0 points, Comic Book Pretty -0 points

Semblance = Glyphs -0 points

Equipment = Scroll -0 points

---

Points

+12000 points
12000
---

Disadvantages

Worst Day Ever +300 points
Humble Beginnings +300 points
12600
---

Subtracting

-100 extra points
12500
---

Saber

skip
12500
---

Principle Nature

Neutral
12500
---

Disposition to Action

Good
12500
---

Personality Traits

Kind, Honorable, Cool, Resolute, Idealistic, Cheerful, Friendly, Confident, 
Mischievous, Wild, Moral/Ethical
12500
---

Wealth

Die rolls... 4 (Fabulously Wealthy)
12500
---

Advantages

Extra Skill -100 points (Engineer)
Extensive Education -100 points (Inventor)
Talented -100 points (All Musical Instruments)
Expertise -100 points (Physics, Mathematics, Science, History, Economics)
Artistic -100 points (Music/Singing, Dancing, Acting, Painting, 
Reading/Writing)
Choice Apophthegms and Useful Maxims -100 points
No Hangups -100 points
Treasures of Earth -100 points
Reduce, Reuse, Recycle -100 points
Shared CYOA Power -1000 points (Expertise)
Catchy Theme -100 points (Claret's Theme - Langrisser V)
The Stealth Package -300 points
The Domestic Martial Arts Package -300 points
The Girl Package -300 points
The Smart Cookie Package -300 points
The Street Girl/Guy Package -300 points
The Cooking Package -300 points
The Farmer Package -300 points
The RWBY Package -300 points
Special Snowflake -100 points
8000 4500
---

Special Choice

Dark Patron

Dark Patron -3000 points
5000
---

Abilities

skip
5000
---

Some Cheap Advantages

Snacks -50 points
Bed -50 points
Map -50 points
4850
---

Aura

Aura -0 points
4850
---

Semblance

Schnee -0 points
4850
---

Weapons

Variable -100 points (First Form - Multi Action Dust Rapier) (Second Form - 
Precision Sniper Dust Rifle) (Name of Weapon - Schattenlilie {Shadow Lily})
4750
---

Weapon Mods

Apply mods to Schattenlilie

Collapsible -50 points (size of a tablet device)
4700
---

Weight Reduction -50 points
4650
---

Additional Weapon Form -50 points (add Dust Energy Bow)
4600
---

Recoil -50 points
4550
---

Dwelling

House - Castle House -900 points
3650
---

The Great Cure

The Great Cure -100 points
3550
---

Transportation

TARDIS -700 points (upgrade) -300 points
2550
---

Equipment

Scroll -0 points
2550
---

Camo Cloak -100 points
2450
---

Survival Kit/Backpack -100 points
2350
---

Stopwatch -100 points
2250
---

Box of Dust -100 points
2150
---

Fake IDs -100 points
2050
---

Psychic Paper -100 points
1950
---

K9 -100 points
1850
---

Journal Book -100 points
1750
---

Passport -100 points
1650
---

The Morphing Tool -100 points
1550
---

Body Maintenance Amulet -100 points
1450
---

Toilet Med -100 points
1350
---

Convert

+1350 lian




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