[FFML] [www][fanfic][Miraculous Ladybug] Miraculous Ladybug Trilogy: "Papa Pain" / "Overshadow" / "Heartless" @ MythrilMoth.net & FF.net!

[Dot Warner]

I've never seen this particular television series, but it definitely reads like you've captured the spirit of a series finale in your work.

However, I feel like the snappy pace of the trilogy is also its weakness.  Everything happens too quickly for both the audience and the characters to fully take in and react too before the next event gets sprung on them, and just as a potential obstacle gets set up, it is resolved just as quickly in a way that feels artificial.

Overall, though, it was a fun read and I enjoyed it despite not knowing anything about "Miraculous Ladybug".

-"Dot"
http://dotchan.com/

I'm my own mind-altering substance. 8)


>  -------Original Message-------
>  From: Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at mythrilmoth.net>
>  To: The Fanfiction Mailing List <ffml at chez-vrolet.net>
>  Subject: [FFML] [www][fanfic][Miraculous Ladybug] Miraculous Ladybug Trilogy: "Papa Pain" / "Overshadow" / "Heartless" @ MythrilMoth.net & FF.net!
>  Sent: Mar 13 '16 13:21
>  
>  Long time no post!
>  
>  This week, I've written a trilogy of Miraculous Ladybug fics, and for
>  once I'm actually remembering to post an announcement to the FFML!
>  
>  The entire trilogy can be found as one story on FF.net:
>  
>  https://www.fanfiction.net/s/11831187/1/Papa-Pain
>  
>  Or as individual stories on my personal website:
>  
>  http://www.mythrilmoth.net/papapain.html
>  http://www.mythrilmoth.net/overshadow.html
>  http://www.mythrilmoth.net/heartless.html
>  
>  Being current on the French language airings of the series (through
>  "Jackady" which aired on March 6) is recommended.
>  
>  C&C welcome!
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