[FFML] [Fanfic] [X Over Fic] [Alt Uni Fic] [Fic] [MLP] The Dark Sunset

Liath Hidson liath.shadow at gmail.com
Tue Dec 23 14:31:28 PST 2014


You know, this looks like the longest story bit from you in forever. Now to actually make them more than 50,000 words! Come on, you can do it!

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> On Dec 22, 2014, at 7:47 PM, "Cute Nightgazer Starlight" <nightgazer at comcast.net> wrote:
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> Disclaimer at the bottom to avoid giving away the crossover.
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> AN : Based off of the comic Equestria Girls Holiday Special.
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> AN2 : And will contain spoilers for it now.
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> The Dark Sunset
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> by
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> Cute Nightgazer Starlight
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> Well, at least everything turned out, right? Everyone will find out who Anon-A-Miss really was and Sunset herself would be off the hook. Right?
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> Wrong.
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> Wrong!
> 
> Sunset had wanted so much to believe that, but she couldn't.
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> She had tried so much, worked so hard to prove that she had changed.
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> And for awhile she had actually thought she was making progress.
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> After all she had five friends who loved her no mater what now, didn't she?
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> No, she knew now that she didn't.
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> They weren't her friends, she realized that now as she held her leather jacket closed trying to hide in it as the chill night air seemed to actually get colder in just a few moments.
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> It wasn't like she had a place to sleep tonight. She already told the homeless shelter that she had a place to stay for the week since everyone was hosting a slumber party, a different night each. She doubted that they still had a bed for her.
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> Looking up into the streetlight that was illuminating the snowflakes as they flurried by, she watched Superman fly by as he kept and eye on Canterlot City.
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> 'Too bad he can't help me.' she thought. 'My troubles are beyond his power.'
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> "Why do they hate me? They promised me that they were my friends, that they loved me?" Sunset sobbed out. It was going to be a cold night, and instead of spending it at a friend's house she would likely be spending it in the open cold air.
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> She didn't get an answer, not that she expected to get one. She was alone, a fact that she would have to get used to.
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> Following the path she was on, Sunset came to her favorite park. During the spring and summer, she would often come out her and sit by the pond and feed the birds. It was so relaxing, and there was something about the place that just made her feel good. It was so beautiful and peaceful.
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> In the winter it was still beautiful and peaceful, though in a different way. The pond was frozen over, and though she would expect people to come skate on it the park had made it against the rules after some kid fell through the ice last winter. Thankfully they were pulled out before anything bad could happen to them. Well, unless you counted the yuki onna. But the mutations she caused had actually helped the kid. And healed all his health problems up. Even if he would be a she for the rest of her life.
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> Walking over to her favorite bench, the one she had had her first lesbian and first public sex experience on, Sunset brushed the snow off the wooden seat before collapsing onto it. Hugging herself she leaned forward, rocking a little. More tears joined the first, as she once again asked herself 'Why?'
> 
> She knew she was once a royal bitch to the entire school but she had thought that after the Battle of the Bands and that mess with Starswirl's sealed-evil-in-a-can banished-to-another-world, aka the Sirens, magic problem  everything was forgiven. It seemed like all of her hard work was paying off as she had friends and people who smiled and greeted her everyday.
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> She even had five awesome friends who she did everything with. Sure she still had her secrets from them, such as being a homeless prostitute. It wasn't something she wanted them to know.
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> Yet the last few days had shown just how little her friends really cared about her. They didn't believe her. Sunset had thought that after everything they would have trusted her. She was the freaking Element of Trust for crying out loud.
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> Sitting here in the cold night, crying, Sunset couldn't figure out how they could betray her so.
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> Sunset sighed heavily. She knew the answer, had always feared it. But she needed to face it.
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> She was unloved and unwanted both here and in Equestria, where she had a death sentence hanging over her head. Celestia had never forgiven her for what she did. Sentencing her to execution the next morning kinda gave that impression to he r then.
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> "I give up." Sunset said, as she pulled a small pocket knife from her pocket.
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> It was a small thing, usually used to do small things such as cutting string or ribbon since the blade itself was pretty sharp.
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> It would be so easy to do something else with it.
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> Pulling back the sleeves of her jacket Sunset unfolded the knife and began tracing it over the skin of her wrist. It felt so cold against her skin, the blade running up and down her arm as she debated if this was really what she wanted.
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> ~'You secret stealer!' Pinkie had accused her~, the memory making Sunset press down on the knife drawing a thin line of blood.
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> ~'You're not our friend!' Fluttershy cried~, as Sunset herself was crying. Yet another memory that brought even more pressure for the next cut, even more crimson liquid pooling up around the small laceration.
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> ~'How could you do this? After all we've been through together?' Rarity asked, disappointment filling her voice.~
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> Sunset sobbed out as she slashed at her wrist this time, fumbling with the blade so it drew blood, but not much. Crimson droplets were starting to stain the snow below as she sat there shivering from the cold, and shuddering from her sobs.
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> ~'I'm sorry, but you did this to us. Tell whatever secrets you want. But we don't have to listen.' Applejack had said~, the memory drawing a loud sob from Sunset as she cut another slash into her wrist. Switching hands, Sunset gripped the knife, though watching the blood flow was making her feel weaker, even if she really hadn't lost all that much.
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> And finally, ~'Hey! Get out!' Rainbow Dash snapped out, Applejack following up with, 'Yer not welcome here, Sunset!'~
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> With another loud sob Sunset brought the knife up with the last memory, intending to bring it across her wrist to hopefully cut an artery or something. She didn't care, she just wanted the memories and pain to go away.
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> ~'Yer not welcome here, Sunset!'~
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> ~'Yer not welcome here, Sunset!'~
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> ~'Yer not welcome here, Sunset!'~
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> The same line that Applejack and made kept repeating in her mind, reminding her they didn't want her. She wasn't welcome here. She never was, and was stupid to think otherwise. With her hand shaking uncontrollably, Sunset then very quickly slashed her vulnerable wrists.
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> The blood gushed out in a torrent from both her wrists.
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> Sunset just looked at it, and smiled.
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> "Soon." she mummered. "Soon I will be free of this thing. This pain filled thing called life... with all it's betrayals, lies, and people abandoning me."
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> Sunset fell unconscious.
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> ***
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> A shadowy figure then walked over to Sunset's dying body. "Is this her?" he asked.
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> "Yes." said a shadowy figure shaped like an equine. "This is her. The pain of her 'friends' betrayal led her to this now to escape from it."
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> The man looked at the dying girl and said "In many ways she is like me. Once regarded as a monster. Trying to find 'redemption'. Trying to find some reason to believe. Then finding it. Only for it to have turned out to be a lie. I will help her to get vengeance on the ones who did this to her."
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> The man held his hand to Sunset's body and dark, writhing tendrils burst forth and settled into her body. He pulled his hand back. He nodded in satisfaction at the result.
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> He nodded and looked down at her body. "Welcome to my Cadre Elite, Sunset Shimmer. We will take our vengeance on humanity for it's betrayals of us."
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> Alex Mercer smiled.
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> Disclaimer : I do not own MLP, Hasbro and Lauren Faust does. I do not own Prototype(2), Radical Entertainment does. Do not sue... I am just a poor, crippled, diseased guy who has no money.
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