[FFML] [Crossover] [Drabble] Two Wizards

[Mythril Moth]

>> Slightly forgivable, but ellipses are supposed to be "...", not " . . . 
>> ".


> You know, it's funny. When I first joined the FFML, I did use the "…" and 
> got taken to task for it.
> *shrug* At this point, I think the ". . ." looks better, aesthetically, 
> not to mention it's become habit.
> I'm not trying to be snarky or anything, just noting it.

Only extreme pedants nitpick the formatting of an ellipses, especially with 
the advent of an ellipses *character* in modern typography. So long as there 
are three dots innit, you're good.

> Also, I don't think anyone who grew up with Tony is going to respect 
> authority unless said
> authority figure is Pepper.

> And maybe McGonagall.

I can see Harry instantly picking up on a "Pepper vibe" from Hermione. In 
fact, she'll probably be the only one who can rein him in.

Hmm, it'd be interesting to see their dynamic in this.


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