[FFML] 1. [FANFIC][BGC] Interlude - Revised (skychan)

[J. w.]

Hello,
After reading the updated part of this interlude. I have to say it seems to flow much better and expalins things a little bit better then before. Its a good idea nto know what is happeing while kari is down for the count you could say. I really do like this story and thanks for the writing. I know I have saif i suck at ripping things apart and trying to make a story better so all I can say is this is a much better peice then before and thanks again for writing.
jason walters
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