[FFML] [fic][rk][cont] Rurouni Yahiko Chapter 31: The Tale of Two Shinobi

[Adrian Tymes]

One quick note:

On Fri, Dec 6, 2013 at 4:12 AM, Abdiel <chester.castaneda at gmail.com> wrote:

> "Good thing it was snow that fell on your head, instead of a leaf," was
> something uncharacteristic for Aoshi to verbalize, but he did so anyway.
>
> Sanosuke might quip that, Yahiko could _definitely_ say that, Kenshin
> might tactlessly make that kind of thoughtless remark, Saito could
> probably come up with something nastier, but Aoshi?
>
> Not a chance. Still, that knowing, "blink and you'll miss it" flash of a
> grin on his face said it all.
>
> "The 'leaf on the head' shtick is for raccoon dogs, not weasels!"
>
> "So you admit you're a weasel?"
>
> "AUGH!"
>

I'm guessing the last three lines are Misao-Aoshi-Misao, but it makes some
sense the other way too.  A quick note on one of the three lines as to
who's speaking would fix this.  E.g.:

"The 'leaf on the head' shtick is for raccoon dogs, not weasels!", she
explained.
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