[FFML] [Request] Frozen Butterfly Arc 3 Chapter 1 Reviewer Request

[skychan]

Hi,

This chapter is NOT ready for general consumption.  However lacking a
dedicated prereader what I woudl like is to find someone willing to go
through what I have now and offer comments on pacing and what scenes may
yet be missing from the current chapter.  To have another pair of eyes look
at it and let me know what they think is weak or missing so that as I do my
revisions I can have a better ultimate product.

If you are interested please email me directly,

Thank you,

skywise,skychan
Kelly Schultz
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