[FFML] Gundam Storm, Ch. 10 (1st Draft)

[Arthur Hansen]

On Thu, May 31, 2012 at 12:40 AM, Andrew Dynon <adynon at internode.on.net>wrote:

> As my Gale Gundam turnd to face the Sirius, I could almost see an image of
> Pallas, projected over the frame of the mobile suit I was about to fight.
> The face-off with my sibling seemed to last far longer than the couple of
> seconds I knew it actually took, but, right now, everything was more there
> -
> time slower, distances and angles more precise, actions and reactions more
> clear.  And with it came the same battle-lust that I had felt the previous
> times I had faced Pallas, and the contradictory knowledge that she was my
> sibling, someone I was supposed to protect and fight alongside.
>

Not really a lot to go over here (other than the formatting got a bit
over-done. Triple-spacing in between paragraphs and all) but I really liked
this chapter.

-- 
Arthur Hansen
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