[FFML] [fanfic][MLP:FiM] The Alicorn Foal, Chapter 6
Adrian Tymes
atymes at gmail.com
Thu Jul 19 10:22:32 PDT 2012
Still good. One nit, though: that kind of travelogue would have
taken much more than a week, wouldn't it? Given what's been
depicted, I could see it taking a week just to walk from Hoofston
to Ponyville (depending on how far apart they are), with minor
side trips.
(Unless Pinky was moving at Pinky speed - such as when she
was chasing Dash - but that only tends to happen when she's
excited and uninjured.)
On Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 5:26 AM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net> wrote:
> "But I saw a whole lot of neat places on my way home! Hosstin, San Anponio,
> Baltimare, Gnu Orleans, Chicagoat, Sacrapinto..."
>
> Twilight took a step back. "Uhh...Pinkie...most of those places aren't
> anywhere between Hoofston and Ponyville. Some of them are on the other side
> of Equestria!"
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