[FFML] [fanfic][Yotsuba&!] Fuuka & Playing House (part 2/?)

[Adrian Tymes]

On Tue, Sep 27, 2011 at 4:59 PM, Mythril Moth <mythrilmoth at sbcglobal.net> wrote:
> And here's some more of the fic absolutely nobody wants.

You never know how many readers you have, if you never get any C&C.

> Standard disclaimers apply. C&C welcome, unless you're going to tell me what
> a horrible story this is and that I should not write fanfic of this series
> ever, in which case don't waste anyone's time with that.

Fanfic in general has an implied "bring your own brain bleach".  Then again,
professional fiction can be that way too.  You'd be surprised what makes it onto
bookstore shelves.

For example, be grateful you have yet to read a dominatrix Yotsuba doujin that
someone worked on for months and got paid for.

> Asagi blinked. "*THAT'S* what all the random cleaning and being over here
> hours on end was? You get off on being a housewife?"

Because orgasming just from putting on a maid outfit is a pretty rare fetish.

> Fuuka rolled her eyes. "I've cleaned every inch of this house top to bottom,
> done your laundry, cooked and shopped for you. Anything I needed to know
> about you, I found out." She grinned. "I *can* study. If I'm studying
> something worth studying."

Science, bah.  Who needs warp drive?  Math, feh.  That's what computers
are for: computing.  Writing, meh.  Ppl cn rd my txt spk.  But Kotashi?
That is a subject worth years of study.

> Koiwai raised an eyebrow. "You...were planning to play chess with my heart?"
>
> "I'm a woman," Fuuka replied with a smirk. "It's what we do."

Hearts, lacking hands, can't move the pieces.  Use a chess clock, and they
forfeit all their moves.  It's almost impossible to lose!

> Fuuka blushed. "Probably a good idea." She toyed with the spoon in her empty
> cup. "I'm sorry if I embarassed you or anything. I just...as long as we're
> airing everything out, I just wanted to bring that up too."

embarrassed

> Fuuka returned shortly after her sisters woke up. It was obvious she hadn't
> slept all night, but she didn't seem particularly fatigued.

It is a rare person who can pull an all-nighter without problems.

> Mom sniffled and smiled. "I can't help it...one of my babies is all grown up
> and leaving the nest." Wiping at her eyes with a napkin, she added, "and it
> isn't the one I hoped I'd be rid of first."
>
> "Love you too Mom," Asagi called from the kitchen door.

Asagi's going to grow up to be the one saddled with taking care of the parents
in their elder years, ne?

> "I get my own mommy...my very own mommy..." Yotsuba said, voice thick with
> wonder.

Forget pickup lines: this is how to make certain girls' hearts melt.

> "Koiwai-san didn't tell you yet?" Asagi asked, a mischevious tone in her
> voice.

mischievous

> Mrs. Ayase facepalmed. "You didn't."
>
> "Who? Me?" Asagi asked innocently, covering a giggle with her fingertips.

Even when being kind and considerate, Asagi is Asagi.