[FFML] [One-Shot] [My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic] The Question

[StudioPC]

On Sep 9, 2011, at 9:51 PM, Henry Cobb wrote:

> On Thu, Sep 8, 2011 at 2:14 AM, StudioPC <studiopc at sbcglobal.net>  
> wrote:
>> Her words set Luna at ease, chasing Nightmare Moon's rage back to its
>> kennel. But only for now. Only for today.
>
> I personally just didn't get the emotional connection. What were the
> signs of this rage? How did it feel as it came up and then what were
> the steps it took as it backed down? How exactly did she show her
> growing sense of ease?
>
> -HJC

That's what I'm missing! I knew there was something off and couldn't  
figure it out.

*off to edit*