[FFML] [SHnY] The Inspiration of Haruhi Suzumiya

[Michael Clark]

> Haruhi Suzumiya was sitting at her "Brigade Commander" desk and
> looking over at the door to the clubroom she have commandeered.

"Had" commandeered, I think.

> Itsuki and Mikuru looked at me in shock. Even Yuki closed her book
> and put it aside.

Koizumi, Asahina, Nagato.

> "A triple PhD in Physics, Quantum Chemistry and Brain Science."

Lowercase: physics, quantum chemistry, brain science (though I think the
last one is a bit imprecise).

An interesting idea. Haruhi has that uncanny academic ability about her,
and putting her energies into science seems like a smart move to get her
focus on something innocuous. Is this something you'd continue?

-Michael Clark