[FFML] Mobile Suit Gundam Storm, Ch. 5 (First Draft)

[Arthur Hansen]

On Fri, Apr 15, 2011 at 5:38 PM, Andrew Dynon <adynon at internode.on.net> wrote:
> [Before we start, I've been procrastinating on revisions for chapters 3 and
> 4.  I'll get to them soon, I promise!]

I have to say I really like this so far (even with it being light in
description!) as things seem to be heating up.

You might want to go into detail a little bit about what makes this
Gundam universe different in Earth's Orbit. UC had the shattered
colonies schoals, AC had their really odd colony designs, CE had the
debris ring and OO had the power collector ring. Something to invoke
something unique for your interpretation here.

-- 
Arthur Hansen