[FFML] [Exalted]The Broken Circle 2/5

[miashara at deepfriedpuppies.com]

Quoting DB Sommer <sommert at connecttime.net>:

> Sorry it took me so long to get to this:

No worries. I'm glad of any responses at all.

> miashara at deepfriedpuppies.com wrote:
>
>> Exalted is the creation and property of White Wolf Publishing. No
>>
>> As desperately as we needed to bring Angel to medical care, taking her
>> directly to one of the doctors of Nibeldamt would prove its own death
>> sentence. We were of the opinion that the Dynast would probably be a
>> little testy after everything that had transpired
>>
>
> %  Yeah,  I don't see them being good sports about it.

You know how that goes. they get cranky over the littlest things.

>> ?Mortals, have you come to my abode to offer me a sacrifice?? it
>> asked. The voice was deep, fitting that it should come from the
>> mountainous body. It's lungs must have been cavernous and provided a
>> voice that was filled with age and the old powers.
>>
>>
>
> % Odd. Questions marks seem to have replaced quotes in my version.

Arg. I thought I'd fixed all of those problems.

>>
>> Now if there's one thing I was filled with, lunacy would be a good
>> name for it. ?I'm not as creative as he is, but I'm a lot more
>> spiteful,? I admitted. ?Should you harm her, there is no limit to the
>> horrors I will eagerly seek out to visit upon you, until the gods come
>> to plead with me to stop our revenge.?
>>
>> ?You stand in the presence of a god now!?
>>
>
> % Dog: Cool. I never killed a god before.

See, you've got the attitude down pat.

>> ?The other foundries,? said Angel, suddenly coming to a logical
>> conclusion after silently placing the intervening blocks. ?Ragara
>> controls one foundry, maybe more, and clearly makes a lot of money
>> doing it. If someone else controls the other, they could be feuding
>> and with this much money at stake, they afford some very exotic
>> assassins.?
>>
>>
>
> % Exotic assassins always make things more fun. Just look at Trigun. It
> didn't take off until the Gung Ho Guns showed up

Yeah, especially when they have questionable loyalties.

>
>> designs and mandalas. All five elements repeated, though earth symbols
>> were most common. More subtly displayed, his wealth was apparent in
>> well crafted doors and rooms, a plethora of guards and servants that
>> wore the best in armor and livery, and imported flatware and exotic
>> fruits in baskets. Everything was amazingly functional, but no more
>> expensive the best need be.
>>
>
> % 'expensive than the best need be' perhaps?

definitely something. Let's see.

>> ?Murderer,? he whispered and took my consciousness with his boot.
>>
>>
>
> % Nice work. It might take a while but I'll continue.

and I much appreciate it. Thanks.

Miashara