[FFML] (re) [SI] Chance of a Millennium 10

[clc college]

i just wanted to say wow, talk about a heavy chapter. it is getting very deep in the way they are talking abd getting along to say the least, talk about kyle and matt having to deal with the self douhgt that they are going though in this chapter. i can see that this chapter had no real room for humor, but please, please add some minor humor to chapter with soemtype of 80's music refeance or something else from the 80's...those have been some of the best lines of the story though. the ohter thing is those two keep thinking and talking about it being a game unitl this chapter and finnaily getting it that it is not.
thanks for the humor of this self insert story and it is funny at times though.
i really have to say the the qween is really cool and how she has to deal with two nuts cases per say in a new world. it is cool how she is dealing with it and the loss of her baby really sucks though...
which leads to a though down the road to the next sailor moon...just who is her dad....its some guy from the 20th centry but for awhile he was running around as a chick and then we came home and he still got better into being his old self...util someone got then joke and with at will or with cold water he turns into a chick or somesthing....
then again the though of a dark elf runing around in the court is something funny with all the elder senshi and her adviers pissing themselves when she shows up again with new help shall we say....
 
just wanted to add my 2 cents to the story idea on what i thought of it. sorry if i can add a find tooth comb to the story, i just suck at finding mistakes in things
 
jason walters


      
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